Describe using our senses

In class we were asked to describe war using our senses, here is my work!

	So many soldiers were around in trenches.The trenches are disgusting, so many rats scattered around looking for food.
	Boom!!! The booms went and the soldiers were talking about the next attack. Soldiers snored when they went fast asleep. Soldiers pain or sickness screams when they were trying to get the sickness out of them. Rats nibbling at their food as eating.
	The food go down my throat as I ate and my saliva slip down my throat as the time moves closer and closer til it’s time to go to war.
	Dirty clothes not washed for about 3 weeks or so. Wasted food on the ground after eating. Smoke from bombs. I wish I was at home with a beautiful smell. Smells as if I was at an animal's dead body rotting
	Flees creeping on my body underneath my clothes. Water soaking my shoes and socks. Mud on my bottom as I sit and write my letter.
	Scared, afraid and a little proud of myself because I’m doing the right thing to protect my people I love. It was a honour to have an opportunity to help my people of my island.
	Think this is a little scary and why do we have to have a war, can’t we just talk about things and settle it without fighting and have a big war?

Writing this was so... hard. What I wrote was hard to imagine because we have not got any experience about World War 1 or 2.