Improving Comments
Aloha Bloggers!!! Today we are improving our comments. We had to comment on a buddies blog, I commented on my friend's blog, Tipiloma. Once we had done a comment on their blog, we had to comment on someone else's blog from a different school.
Once we finished that we had SMRF a google drawing. We had to take a screenshot or copy and paste the comment on to the drawing and we had to edit the comment. We wrote another comment in a different text box. It was to the same person but written differently. I added a little bit of changes into it.
Here is my work!!! Enjoy!!!
What I Changed:
In my improved comment, I added punctuation in the right spaces and added words into spaces that should have been added. I added these things because I re-read it and it did not sound or make sense to me.
I hope you enjoyed my work. Please feel free to leave a comment or some feedback for me. If you would like to see more of my work, stay in touch with my blog. I hope you enjoyed my work. I can't wait to see your blog and your work!!!
Catch Ya Later Bloggers!!!
Hello Lavinia,
ReplyDeleteThis post shows a lot of detail and I can tell you put a lot of work into it.
This reminds me of one time last year when I did the very same activity! I find it interesting how much you can change your comment to make it better!
Thanks,
Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School
( https://ymsariana.blogspot.com/ )